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posted by [identity profile] awarrington.livejournal.com at 07:45pm on 07/08/2011
Eeeee! So *cute*!!! I love this! :D

I love Jim's inner monologue all the way through this, his lascivious thoughts interspersed with strategies to use to approach Spock *safely* and get his wishes across. There's a certain charm to Jim apparently feeling a bit insecure and definitely unsure of himself in an arena where he's normally so confident, recognizing the sweep-'em-off-their-feet approach won't cut any ice with Spock. The references to Browning, Stanley & Livingstone were cute, too - of course smart!jim would put those things together in his head, and of course he'd be as in love with Spock's brain/intelligence as he was with his body. :)

The solution, of course, was such an elegant one - who needs words when you've got a telepath around?

This was funny and sweet and wonderful! Thank you so much. ♥
 
posted by [identity profile] jaylee-g.livejournal.com at 10:25pm on 08/08/2011
Yayayayay! I'm so very, very happy you enjoyed it. I was torn on whether to do a humorous approach or a more serious one but once the communication theme popped into my head, the story kind of wrote itself, lol. It was a great prompt, one that could be done in a million different ways, I really enjoyed contemplating the possibilities of it.

Thank you for the wonderful prompt, for the fabulous, heartwarming, huge smile inducing feedback, and for participating in the Reading/Reviewing challenge! You are awesome beyond the telling of it *hugs*

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